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Renesmee
The silver and red dress flowed around me. I spun around and giggled, watching the colors mix beautifully.
"Hold still, Nessie," Auntie Alice complained. I stopped moving. She pulled the last of my curly hair into the bun and placed and silver and ruby crown on my head. "There." She spun me around to face the mirror.
I gasped in shock. I could barley recognize myself. The small crown on my head complimented my dress very well. The blush on my cheeks made me look less pale and made the color of the dress a more background color. Auntie Alice had definitely made my face the center of attention, not the dress.
"Is she ready?" I heard Daddy approach us.
"Yes. Now don't ruin anything Edward. Not her make-up, her hair, her dress, nothing. Or you'll be ruined."
"Oh, wow Ness," Daddy said, taking my head and leading me down the stairs, "you're beautiful."
I blushed. "Haha. Thanks Dad."
"Oh Renesmee!" I felt a small gust of wind as Momma scooped me in her arms. "Oh Nessie! You're so beautiful!"
"Watch out, love," Daddy smiled. "Alice'll have you're beauty if you mess Nessie up in anyway." We heard a growl upstairs and we laughed.
"Edward, we're off!" Grandpa Carlisle called from the garage.
Auntie Alice dashed down the stairs. "Is that everyone? Oh good. Now, keep Renesmee in the kitchen till Jazzy and I leave. Only the three of us are allowed to see her till she gets there."
We waited in the kitchen as instructed till we heard the Porsche drive away.
"Alright, lets go!" Daddy said, leading us to the Ferrari. Trees and other beautiful scenery passed us as we drove to the Seattle Waterfront Hotel*. In 45 minutes (Edward was speeding. I mean SPEEDING) we reached the Ballroom and the valet was driving the car to the garage. We stepped inside the ornately decorated lobby towards the entrance of the ballroom. My heartbeat began to pick up.
"Calm down sweetie, you'll see him soon," Momma comforted. She knew whom I wanted.
I heard the click clack of heels. Breath taking Auntie Rosalie ran towards us.
"Oh good you're here. People have been waiting for almost two hours!"
"Two?" Momma asked. "They're supposed to have arrived ONE hour ago."
"Alice," Auntie and Daddy said at the same time. Momma rolled her eyes as I giggled.
"I'll tell Carlisle it’s time. Come with me Bella. You're supposed to stand with Esme, Sue, and Renee." She led Momma into a set of double doors.
I waited a few moments and then I heard Grandpa.
"Announcing the celebrant, Ms. Renesmee Carlie Cullen!" The double doors in front of us were opened by Uncle Emmett and Uncle Jasper. Daddy took my arm in his and led me inside.
Many familiar faces were turned towards us. Some I recognized. Seth, Ava, Leah, Jason, the one she had imprinted on, Jessica and Mike Newton and Angela and Ben Cheney, Momma's high school friends, and other people I would probably know later this night.
Daddy steered me down a red, velvet, rose petal showered aisle. We turned half way down the ballroom. In front of me I saw Jacob on his left side stood Grandpa Carlisle, Grandpa Charlie, Grandpa Phil and an open spot I assumed was Daddy's. Across them stood Grandma Esme, Grandma Sue, Grandma Renee and Momma. Jake looked unbelievably gorgeous in his tuxedo. I smiled triumphantly. Jacob was mine. Once we got own the aisle, Daddy released me arm and took his place across Momma. Jake replaced Daddy's cool arm and he led me up the court** table. When we took our seats, everyone applauded. My heart expanded. I grinned at Jake. He grinned back, his perfect white teeth contrasting his brown, smooth skin. Tonight, I was a queen and Jacob was my king.
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*I don’t think this really exists here in Seattle. I just made it up because I couldn't think of a good place for a special birthday
** Court. Court table - During a debut (18th b-day celebration), there is a court table where the debutant and her court (usually friends and escorts) sits.
***This is the link to my imaginary floor plane of the ballroom where Renesmee has her bday: omgd4ever.deviantart.com/art/R…
The silver and red dress flowed around me. I spun around and giggled, watching the colors mix beautifully.
"Hold still, Nessie," Auntie Alice complained. I stopped moving. She pulled the last of my curly hair into the bun and placed and silver and ruby crown on my head. "There." She spun me around to face the mirror.
I gasped in shock. I could barley recognize myself. The small crown on my head complimented my dress very well. The blush on my cheeks made me look less pale and made the color of the dress a more background color. Auntie Alice had definitely made my face the center of attention, not the dress.
"Is she ready?" I heard Daddy approach us.
"Yes. Now don't ruin anything Edward. Not her make-up, her hair, her dress, nothing. Or you'll be ruined."
"Oh, wow Ness," Daddy said, taking my head and leading me down the stairs, "you're beautiful."
I blushed. "Haha. Thanks Dad."
"Oh Renesmee!" I felt a small gust of wind as Momma scooped me in her arms. "Oh Nessie! You're so beautiful!"
"Watch out, love," Daddy smiled. "Alice'll have you're beauty if you mess Nessie up in anyway." We heard a growl upstairs and we laughed.
"Edward, we're off!" Grandpa Carlisle called from the garage.
Auntie Alice dashed down the stairs. "Is that everyone? Oh good. Now, keep Renesmee in the kitchen till Jazzy and I leave. Only the three of us are allowed to see her till she gets there."
We waited in the kitchen as instructed till we heard the Porsche drive away.
"Alright, lets go!" Daddy said, leading us to the Ferrari. Trees and other beautiful scenery passed us as we drove to the Seattle Waterfront Hotel*. In 45 minutes (Edward was speeding. I mean SPEEDING) we reached the Ballroom and the valet was driving the car to the garage. We stepped inside the ornately decorated lobby towards the entrance of the ballroom. My heartbeat began to pick up.
"Calm down sweetie, you'll see him soon," Momma comforted. She knew whom I wanted.
I heard the click clack of heels. Breath taking Auntie Rosalie ran towards us.
"Oh good you're here. People have been waiting for almost two hours!"
"Two?" Momma asked. "They're supposed to have arrived ONE hour ago."
"Alice," Auntie and Daddy said at the same time. Momma rolled her eyes as I giggled.
"I'll tell Carlisle it’s time. Come with me Bella. You're supposed to stand with Esme, Sue, and Renee." She led Momma into a set of double doors.
I waited a few moments and then I heard Grandpa.
"Announcing the celebrant, Ms. Renesmee Carlie Cullen!" The double doors in front of us were opened by Uncle Emmett and Uncle Jasper. Daddy took my arm in his and led me inside.
Many familiar faces were turned towards us. Some I recognized. Seth, Ava, Leah, Jason, the one she had imprinted on, Jessica and Mike Newton and Angela and Ben Cheney, Momma's high school friends, and other people I would probably know later this night.
Daddy steered me down a red, velvet, rose petal showered aisle. We turned half way down the ballroom. In front of me I saw Jacob on his left side stood Grandpa Carlisle, Grandpa Charlie, Grandpa Phil and an open spot I assumed was Daddy's. Across them stood Grandma Esme, Grandma Sue, Grandma Renee and Momma. Jake looked unbelievably gorgeous in his tuxedo. I smiled triumphantly. Jacob was mine. Once we got own the aisle, Daddy released me arm and took his place across Momma. Jake replaced Daddy's cool arm and he led me up the court** table. When we took our seats, everyone applauded. My heart expanded. I grinned at Jake. He grinned back, his perfect white teeth contrasting his brown, smooth skin. Tonight, I was a queen and Jacob was my king.
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*I don’t think this really exists here in Seattle. I just made it up because I couldn't think of a good place for a special birthday
** Court. Court table - During a debut (18th b-day celebration), there is a court table where the debutant and her court (usually friends and escorts) sits.
***This is the link to my imaginary floor plane of the ballroom where Renesmee has her bday: omgd4ever.deviantart.com/art/R…
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I sat in that bathroom and cried for what seemed to be hours. I cried until I couldnt cry anymore, and then I got up.
A few people had come in while I was crying, but no one said anything to me. As I started to leave, a lady came in the door, and she looked my in the eyes. Her reaction scared me.
She looked at me as though I was the devil. She turned and ran out the door, as if shed been scared to death. I hesitated, and then turned towards the mirror, only to see dark red eyes staring at me. I noticed that my face wasnt red from crying, but that it was perfectly clear, and it almost looked paler. I had changed a little mo
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If thats the best you can do to shut me up, Im going to be talking all night. When he didnt respond, I turned to look at him.
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Yeah.... I thought you named him David in the last chapter. :3